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Monday, July 29, 2013
THE VALUE OF A GOOD CRITIQUE
Pecos Ruins as Critiqued at RCC
This image has been in my portfolio for six years. I showed this version at Redwood Camera Club this past Saturday. What I took from the critique was that it could stand some cropping of the foreground. Below are several variations.
Pecos Ruins Variation 01
In this version the subject is now off center, and nearly in the lower third quadrant. Perhaps I took it too far.
Pecos Ruins Variation 02
In this variation, I backed off of the crop to include more of the foreground foliage.
Pecos Ruins Variation 03
I suppose that I could go on and on. I do think the crop needs to place the subject into the corner. I would love some feedback.